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Nanosuit Kyouko by NickH49 Nanosuit Kyouko by NickH49
Just another random thought on how my OCs would look like in other video game universes. This time, it's my OC Kyouko wearing a Nanosuit from the Crysis(TM) video game series dual wielding the Hammer handgun and the Feline SMG. I'm so proud of this result :iconfinallyplz: This took forever to draw out (TwT) I hope you like it :iconsmilieplz:

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Crysis Nanosuit design and Crysis 2 logo (c) EA and Crytek
Kyouko and art (c) me :iconnickh49:
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Okay I'm new at critiquing this so bear with me. I'll start out by first saying this picture is awesome. The detail of the suit on point and very nice work with the guns. now I do have some problems, the picture itself is good but you should add some darker shading to the suit because its hard to see unless its blown up to a bigger size which also makes it look flat from a distance. also the neck part of the suit should be curved up a little more so the suit doesn't look like its pasted on
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Critique by SereneScape Jan 24, 2013, 10:15:00 PM
Recreating the nanosuit from Crysis 2 is extraordinarily difficult, especially in an anime style and I applaud you for taking on the challenge.
Here are some things I noticed:
The torso compared the the legs is a little off, to fix this you would either have to twist the torso so that it is more off center from the viewer, or take the legs/thighs and twist them to face the viewer more.
Her left hand appears to only have four fingers including the thumb, at that angle the pinkie should be visible.

You did an excellent job on the guns, however, the Trijicon sights on the pistol do not match the angle the pistol was drawn at. That makes it looks flat when it isn't. It's kind of like an optical illusion, you cover up the sights and the pistol become more three dimensional again. ^-^;;
The SMG should share the same angle as the pistol because of the way she is holding it, it looks flat as it is right now.

With all the curvature and lines involved in drawing the nanosuit it would be easy to lose direction in the anatomy.
I do not know what process you followed for drawing this, but I would suggest drawing Kyouko without the nanosuit or clothes. That way you can focus completely on the anatomy.
Once she is drawn then draw the nanosuit, look up some references for human muscle anatomy since the nanosuit follows the muscle curvature of the human body.

It appears that you used the vector pen tools for this lines and the paint bucket to fill in the main colors.
When I expand the image I notice white gaps in some corners where the color did not fill in completely, this is a problem with using the bucket tool, but you can fix this with the brush when you fill in all the colors.
There is also very little difference in line width, if you vary the width of the lines it will help make your line are pop out a little more.

Overall you did a great job on this piece, but I feel that you are capable of much, much more.
Drawing more complex hair would add nicely to the detail on the suit, try your hand at drawing eight or ten point bangs in the future.
Keep pushing the detail in your drawing as a whole and you will be creating some fantastic line art.
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A2theC2theG Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013
Looks like she should've been wearing the helmet.
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NickH49 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Because of the eyepatch? XD
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A2theC2theG Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013
Indeed •<i:)
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TrueRageXRT Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Sweet! I love Crysis!!!
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NickH49 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Me too! Hoping to get Crysis 3 soon :3
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TrueRageXRT Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Holy crap that's out?
lol I've been so poor I haven't looked at new games since 2011.
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NickH49 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yep. It's been out since last month.
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TrueRageXRT Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
dang, I need to get a paycheck again :P
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MasterghostUnlimited Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
pretty cool and badass
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NickH49 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you :D I'm glad you think so ^^
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MasterghostUnlimited Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ur welcome and anytime
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flashsteps Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Very cool c: I love the outfit, and the color of the hair! :la:
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NickH49 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Why thank you ^^ I'm glad :D
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flashsteps Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aww, your very welcome! c:
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SereneScape Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ok...these comments were meant to be critiques, but I suck and posted them wrong. No wonder why the first one disappeared.
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SereneScape Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
If you could remove or hide these I would appreciate it, I can't seem to find how to delete my comments. >.>
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NickH49 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I don't think you can delete comments. All I can do is hide them ^^;
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SigmaEleven Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Student Digital Artist
The anatomy still has much to improve.
Anyway...
can I take a shot of this my style? Take it as a free request :iconheplz:
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SigmaEleven Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Student Digital Artist
wait. not a free request, but as an art trade? [link] while I draw this?
sorry for troubling you. I have nothing to do.. :icony-u-notearplz:
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NickH49 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No trouble ^^ I'll trade with you :)
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SigmaEleven Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Student Digital Artist
You do the link while I draw this.
No probs right?
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NickH49 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No problem at all ^^
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